A sarcastic take on Life,Love and Lungis by a wandering Malayali. NoT for the easily offended.
Chocolate
She feels shy she says, When my gaze wanders into her syrupy sweet chocolate eyes, I fantasize her darkness melting in my mouth today, Only to hear her say, "What?!! Just blink or look away,ok?"
Hahaha, I have been reading this sudden burst of new posts, and this, THIS takes the cake. Are you quite sure the French speaking man did not slip you some questionable substance? :P
"Syrupy sweat chocolate eyes" This the first time I heard this kind of comparison...I guess I wanna eat chocolate right now...but I would give a 10 on 10 for dhoz lines... Nice attempt..!!
Was your sweet tooth acting up when you wrote this?
ReplyDeleteI can find no other plausible explanation for this disaster :)
ReplyDeleteHaha..maybe you should have another attempt on a full stomach..this one looks like you could only manage 4 lines before you got a case of the munchies
ReplyDeleteHa ha ha ... so did you blink or did you look away? ;-)
ReplyDeleteNeither ;)
DeleteHahaha, I have been reading this sudden burst of new posts, and this, THIS takes the cake. Are you quite sure the French speaking man did not slip you some questionable substance? :P
ReplyDeleteThis is so different...
ReplyDeleteAnd I feel like eating a chocolate !!
"Syrupy sweat chocolate eyes"
ReplyDeleteThis the first time I heard this kind of comparison...I guess I wanna eat chocolate right now...but I would give a 10 on 10 for dhoz lines...
Nice attempt..!!
Akshitha, you will see and hear a lot of things here that you won't elsewhere ;)
DeleteEnjoyyyyyyyyyyy !!!!!!
Oops sorry, I guess it was a typo..sweet turned to.sweat...lol..!!
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