Chocolate






She feels shy she says,
When my gaze wanders into her syrupy sweet chocolate eyes,
I  fantasize her darkness melting in my mouth today,
Only to hear her say,
"What?!! Just blink or look away,ok?"





10 comments:

  1. Was your sweet tooth acting up when you wrote this?

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  2. I can find no other plausible explanation for this disaster :)

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  3. Haha..maybe you should have another attempt on a full stomach..this one looks like you could only manage 4 lines before you got a case of the munchies

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  4. Ha ha ha ... so did you blink or did you look away? ;-)

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  5. Hahaha, I have been reading this sudden burst of new posts, and this, THIS takes the cake. Are you quite sure the French speaking man did not slip you some questionable substance? :P

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  6. This is so different...
    And I feel like eating a chocolate !!

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  7. "Syrupy sweat chocolate eyes"
    This the first time I heard this kind of comparison...I guess I wanna eat chocolate right now...but I would give a 10 on 10 for dhoz lines...
    Nice attempt..!!

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    1. Akshitha, you will see and hear a lot of things here that you won't elsewhere ;)
      Enjoyyyyyyyyyyy !!!!!!

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  8. Oops sorry, I guess it was a typo..sweet turned to.sweat...lol..!!

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